Friday, October 9, 2009

Dead. Again. - #fridayflash


Their death at his hand came much easier than he thought it would, all that meticulous planning, worry and agonizing whether he should go through with it was for naught. It was done and over now and he had to deal with the consequences. The lazy bastard was silenced and his bitchy wife gone in the same stroke. He felt both exhilaration and apprehension as he happened upon them late that evening while they silently awaited him in comfort, right there in his own study. At least there was no blood, he'd made certain that clean up would be effortless and there was not even a trace of them the next morning. Did they feel any pain? He doubted it, and certainly not as much pain as he did after deleting the file, wrestling with weak characters for three months, trashing 114 pages of manuscript, and starting his thriller over with new protagonists for the fifth time in two years.

29 comments:

Clive Martyn said...

I can identify with that :-)

Bukowski's Basement said...

... I still dig this. And we've all been there.

Jodi MacArthur said...

Murder, he wrote, then ditched the manuscript. LOL. Twisted ending. I like.

Rachel Blackbirdsong said...

Love it! And yes I am also guilty of murder myself. In fact I think I might be a serial killer.

Cascade Lily said...

Wondered why there was no blood!

Paul D. Brazill said...

Write off! Last writes etc. Very good.

Chance said...

great! know the feeling!

mazzz_in_Leeds said...

Haha! Well, sometimes murder is justified!

Linda said...

Murder HE Wrote! Murder most excellent. Made me snort my coffee all over keyboard. Peace, Linda

elizabethditty said...

Ha! I've been tempted to commit such a deed myself from time to time. :-) Nice work!

Laura Eno said...

I have also committed murder, so I can sympathize. Excellent story - murder of the bloodless sort.

Lee Hughes said...

Nice work Mike, less blood makes for less cleaning.

Laurita said...

You ruthless killer, you. This was very clever. :)

Marisa Birns said...

LOL! Very well done. And since I was having breakfast while reading it, so glad it was bloodless.

Thanks!

Barry J. Northern said...

Oh, this is great. Nice twist and so true.

Christian Bell said...

The paperwork for this kind of killing is brutal, but in a different way. Well done!

Jim_Wisneski said...

HAHA! This is great! It's funny because I just tossed a 35,000 WIP to start it over because I hated the characters. . . I wanted to kill them. . .

J. M. Strother said...

I kind of knew where this was going as I have been there myself. But I'm not too good at cleaning up afterward, and tend to leave the bodies lurking on the hard drive.

Loved it.
~jon

shannon esposito said...

Bahaha! Murdering your darlings is painful but necessary sometimes. Great!

Erin Cole said...

In this sense, I'm a serial killer. Nice to know I'm not alone.

John Wiswell said...

And that's where theodicy comes from.

ganymeder said...

Great story.

The Writer said...

If I stuffed all the bodies in my closet, it'd burst a very long time ago. =D

Fantastic!

Chris Chartrand said...

Great story!

Karen from Mentor said...

Nicely done. I grinned in sympathy [or empathy] at the end. Great flash.
:0)

Tomara Armstrong said...

HA! I was curious as to what you did with the bodies... DOH!

Nice twist!
~2

David said...
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David said...

I didn't say that twist coming. You caught me out there and made me laugh too :)

I loved the sentence "all that meticulous planning, worry and agonizing whether he should go through with it was for naught".

Wilson said...

Nice twist. You are GREAT!

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