
Their death at his hand came much easier than he thought it would, all that meticulous planning, worry and agonizing whether he should go through with it was for naught. It was done and over now and he had to deal with the consequences. The lazy bastard was silenced and his bitchy wife gone in the same stroke. He felt both exhilaration and apprehension as he happened upon them late that evening while they silently awaited him in comfort, right there in his own study. At least there was no blood, he'd made certain that clean up would be effortless and there was not even a trace of them the next morning. Did they feel any pain? He doubted it, and certainly not as much pain as he did after deleting the file, wrestling with weak characters for three months, trashing 114 pages of manuscript, and starting his thriller over with new protagonists for the fifth time in two years.

29 comments:
I can identify with that :-)
... I still dig this. And we've all been there.
Murder, he wrote, then ditched the manuscript. LOL. Twisted ending. I like.
Love it! And yes I am also guilty of murder myself. In fact I think I might be a serial killer.
Wondered why there was no blood!
Write off! Last writes etc. Very good.
great! know the feeling!
Haha! Well, sometimes murder is justified!
Murder HE Wrote! Murder most excellent. Made me snort my coffee all over keyboard. Peace, Linda
Ha! I've been tempted to commit such a deed myself from time to time. :-) Nice work!
I have also committed murder, so I can sympathize. Excellent story - murder of the bloodless sort.
Nice work Mike, less blood makes for less cleaning.
You ruthless killer, you. This was very clever. :)
LOL! Very well done. And since I was having breakfast while reading it, so glad it was bloodless.
Thanks!
Oh, this is great. Nice twist and so true.
The paperwork for this kind of killing is brutal, but in a different way. Well done!
HAHA! This is great! It's funny because I just tossed a 35,000 WIP to start it over because I hated the characters. . . I wanted to kill them. . .
I kind of knew where this was going as I have been there myself. But I'm not too good at cleaning up afterward, and tend to leave the bodies lurking on the hard drive.
Loved it.
~jon
Bahaha! Murdering your darlings is painful but necessary sometimes. Great!
In this sense, I'm a serial killer. Nice to know I'm not alone.
And that's where theodicy comes from.
Great story.
If I stuffed all the bodies in my closet, it'd burst a very long time ago. =D
Fantastic!
Great story!
Nicely done. I grinned in sympathy [or empathy] at the end. Great flash.
:0)
HA! I was curious as to what you did with the bodies... DOH!
Nice twist!
~2
I didn't say that twist coming. You caught me out there and made me laugh too :)
I loved the sentence "all that meticulous planning, worry and agonizing whether he should go through with it was for naught".
Nice twist. You are GREAT!
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