Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Northwoods

 
Sometimes I go back
to the snows of my
youth

Feathered birch bark kindled
the flames that ignited
dreams

Modest visions
of who
I could be,discovery
uncovered

Those snows
melt not
then nor now, not
ever

Where did
then go
snowy hope of that
time

I saw
between the
solstice nadir and fresh
awakening

9 comments:

  1. Stunningly beautiful and I learned a new word - 'nadir'.
    My favourite, and it is absolutely true:
    Those snows
    melt not
    then nor now, not
    ever

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  2. The snows of my youth. So much encompassed in that line. Beautiful.

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  3. Captivating! I really like the second verse.

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  4. love this michael -- missed it the first time around. the snows of my youth -- so evocative. peace...

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  5. very wistful. I like the "modest visions of who I could be", it set me thinking about the nature of expectations (again - an everlasting topic for me!)

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  6. Just beautiful, Michael. Love the pace of it, like lingering while going forward with a look-back over your shoulder. Nice!

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  7. I love the tone set by that opening, Michael. And the feathery lightness of it which I can feel all the way through even as something heavier is hidden here too. Really nice touch. Wonderful poem, and wonderful thing in this month's Blog Carnival.

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  8. Michael, you never cease to amaze me. Lovely.

    Jeanette Cheezum

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